The world's oceans are filling up with waste plastic
Plastic has been familiar to a lot of people in around the world. The
highly growth the consumption of plastic on the last decade has leading to
change the bio-diversity in the ocean by the waste of plastic. Although this problem
has reason of this there are many solution
One of the first problem of waste
of plastic is many fisherman often dumping the trash into ocean for example in Indonesia
are very easy to dumping the trash without the government permission. There is
no fine that make the fisherman not to do that activity again. Another major
problem is the growth of over consume of plastic this day there are many
company or business use plastic as their bag, resulting in the population of
bio-diversity will be decrease by the fisherman.
It’s important that action is taken
to defense this problem. Government should ensure that adequate legislation and
control that will prevent the fisherman from throwing the plastic, such as the government
should create the charge for the fisherman that do illegal fishing. They need
to focus monitoring the activity of fisherman and society and restrict that. Company
must improve the productivity without using plastic.
To conclude waste of plastic the
horrible phenomena in this world because that has negative impact for the ocean
live. However, with the right action by the society the government and
businesses it can make save our ocean
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