Saturday, July 6, 2019

ENVIRONMENT


The world's oceans are filling up with waste plastic

  Plastic has been familiar to a lot of people in around the world. The highly growth the consumption of plastic on the last decade has leading to change the bio-diversity in the ocean by the waste of plastic. Although this problem has reason of this there are many solution

  One of the first problem of waste of plastic is many fisherman often dumping the trash into ocean for example in Indonesia are very easy to dumping the trash without the government permission. There is no fine that make the fisherman not to do that activity again. Another major problem is the growth of over consume of plastic this day there are many company or business use plastic as their bag, resulting in the population of bio-diversity will be decrease by the fisherman.

  It’s important that action is taken to defense this problem. Government should ensure that adequate legislation and control that will prevent the fisherman from throwing the plastic, such as the government should create the charge for the fisherman that do illegal fishing. They need to focus monitoring the activity of fisherman and society and restrict that. Company must improve the productivity without using plastic.

  To conclude waste of plastic the horrible phenomena in this world because that has negative impact for the ocean live. However, with the right action by the society the government and businesses it can make save our ocean

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