Sunday, May 12, 2019

Anime is My Favorite Things (Paragraph to Essay)




I.                   Introduction
Introductory Paragraph
Sentence 1: Every people have their favorite to entertain their self into good mood and be able relaxed
Sentence 2: when we are in bad mood many people are watching something, drawing something, reading something and other things.
Sentence 3: my Favorite things to entertain myself and be able relaxed is watching animation japan (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.
Thesis Statement: what I like about anime is japan animation (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.
II.                Body
Paragraph 1: Watching japan animation
Topic Sentence: Japan animation
      Major supporting sentence: animation characteristic technique
      Minor supporting sentence:
-          Storyboarding is a graphic organizer in the form of illustrations or images displayed in sequence for the purpose of pre-visualizing a motion picture, animation, motion graphic or interactive media sequence.
-          Voice acting is the art of performing voice-overs or providing voices to represent a character or to provide information to an audience.
-          Character design is the process of defining a game character or other character. Typically, a character's individual strengths and weaknesses are represented by a set of statistics.
-          Cel production is an important innovation to traditional animation, as it allows some parts of each frame to be repeated from frame to frame, thus saving labor.
Conclusion sentence: These are used in making Japan animation. Usual japan animation is an adapted story from some manga, light novel, Visual Novel for example K-On!, Clannad, Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching japan animation from internet. Japan animation have age restriction based on what is the content they show, for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+ years old. I like to watching japan animation because I can relax myself and japan animation is a fun entertainment.

        Paragraph 2: Reading manga
        Topic Sentence: Manga genre
             Major supporting sentence: People of all ages read manga by works in a broad range of genres
  Minor supporting sentence:
-      Action is kind of story utilizes suspense, the tension that is built up when the reader whishes to know how the conflict between the protagonist and antagonist is going to be resolved or what the solution to the puzzle of a thriller is.
-      Adventure is genre of events that happens outside the course of the protagonist's ordinary life, usually accompanied by danger, often by physical action and many kind of things that happen in the protagonist’s story.
-   Comedy is genre always using humor to make the audience and reader laugh.
-    Detective is genre about how to find and solve the problem that happen in the story and its often to investigate a crime. Detective genre is almost same with mystery genre. For example, Detective Conan.
-     Drama is serious dramatic form that combines drama, music, and dance into a complete aesthetic performance experience. The main characters are a male and a woman role.
-          Historical is a plot story that located in the past
     Horror is a suspense story and make the reader to feel frighten, scary, disgust, or startle.
-        Mystery is genre usually involving a mysterious death or a crime to be solved. Often with a closed circle of suspects, each suspect is usually provided with a credible motive and a reasonable opportunity for committing the crime. The central character will often be a detective who eventually solves the mystery by logical deduction from facts presented to the reader.
-          Romance is about the two people as they develop romantic love for each other and work to build a relationship.
-       Science fiction is concepts as advanced science and technology, time travel, parallel universes, fictional worlds, space exploration, and extraterrestrial life.
-      Fantasy genre often uses magic or other supernatural elements as a main plot element, theme, or setting. Magic and magical creatures are common in many of these worlds. For example, using a creature Elf, Minotaur, Orc, Goblin, lizardman, and many more in the story.
-       Sports is a genre using a sports or athletic things as main story.
Conclusion sentence: I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. And I usually read it online and some I have bought and collect it.

      
      Paragraph 3: Drawing anime
      Topic Sentence: Media drawing
Major supporting sentence: Traditional style and digital style
Minor supporting sentence:
-   Traditional style usually using a paper, canvas, and other media things that not using an electronic as a media drawing, and the tools are pencils, many kinds of drawing pencils, brush, crayon, colored chalks, and many more.
-      Digital style usually using an electronic media as a media drawing. The media are from tablet, notepad, smartphone, and pen-tablet.
Conclusion sentence: everyone has their own style in drawing. For me I prefer to draw in traditional for sketching and digital for final drawing. drawing anime is make me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open a commission.
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      Paragraph 4: Reading Novel
         Topic Sentence: Visual novel is an interactive game genre
Major supporting sentence: origin, feature and style
Minor supporting sentence:
-       Originate in Japan, featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual.
-   featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual.
-         most often using anime-style art or occasionally live-action stills.
Conclusion sentence: visual novel is interesting because the story is long and fun, I’m reading visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story, and I cry and laugh by the situation on the story. My friend who usual read novel also like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and easy to understand.

III.             Concluding Paragraph
Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime, and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun because of its genre easy to feel and helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an extra money by drawing in digital, I usually use this money for daily life and buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and much fun than reading novel.


Essay

 Every people have their favorite to entertain their self into good mood and relax. When we are in bad mood many people are watching something, drawing something, reading something and other things. My Favorite things to entertain myself and be able relaxed is watching animation japan (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.

 First is watching japan animation (anime). well, first of all what is japan animation by the way? japan animation means all forms of animated media. outside japan, japan animation have is own characteristic style.  Storyboarding is a graphic organizer in the form of illustrations or images displayed in sequence for the purpose of pre-visualizing a motion picture, animation, motion graphic or interactive media sequence. Voice acting is the art of performing voice-overs or providing voices to represent a character or to provide information to an audience. Character design is the process of defining a game character or other character. Typically, a character's individual strengths and weaknesses are represented by a set of statistics. Cel production is an important innovation to traditional animation, as it allows some parts of each frame to be repeated from frame to frame, thus saving labor. These are used in making Japan animation. Usual japan animation is an adapted story from some manga, light novel, Visual Novel for example K-On!, Clannad, Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching japan animation from internet. Japan animation have age restriction based on what is the content they show, for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+ years old. I like to watching japan animation because I can relax myself and japan animation is a fun entertainment.



 Second is reading manga, people of all ages read manga by works in a broad range of genres. From Action story utilizes suspense, the tension that is built up when the reader want to know how the conflict between the protagonist and antagonist is going to be resolved or what the solution to the puzzle of a thriller is. Adventure events that happens outside the course of the protagonist's ordinary life, usually accompanied by danger, often by physical action and many kind of things that happen in the protagonist’s story. Comedy always using humor to make the audience and reader laugh. Detective about how to find and solve the problem that happen in the story and its often to investigate a crime. Detective almost same with mystery genre. For example, Detective Conan. Drama serious dramatic form combines drama, music, and dance into a complete aesthetic performance experience. The main characters are a male and a woman role. Historical plot story that located in the past. Horror a suspense story and make the reader to feel frighten, scary, disgust, or startle. Mystery involving a mysterious death or a crime to be solved. Often with a closed circle of suspects, each suspect is usually provided with a credible motive and a reasonable opportunity for committing the crime. The central character will often be a detective who eventually solves the mystery by logical deduction from facts presented to the reader. Romance about the two people as they develop romantic love for each other and work to build a relationship. Science-fiction concepts of advanced science and technology, time travel, parallel universes, fictional worlds, space exploration, and extraterrestrial life. Fantasy uses magic or other supernatural elements as a main plot element, theme, or setting. Magic and magical creatures are common in many of these worlds. For example, using a creature Elf, Minotaur, Orc, Goblin, lizardman, and many more in the story. And lastly Sports using a sports or athletic things as main story. I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. And I usually read it online and some I have bought and collect it.


  Third is Drawing anime. Drawing anime is kind of drawing that you draw is based on anime style. Drawing anime is already part of my hobby you can express your imagination and idea into a media drawing. There are two models of drawing style, traditional and Digital style. Traditional style usually using a paper, canvas, and other media things that not using an electronic as a media drawing, and the tools are pencils, many kinds of drawing pencils, brush, crayon, colored chalks, and many more. And digital style usually using an electronic media as a media drawing. The media are from tablet, notepad, smartphone, and pen-tablet. Everyone has their own style in drawing. For me I prefer to draw in traditional for sketching and digital for final drawing. drawing anime is make me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open a commission.



  Last is reading visual novel. visual novel is an interactive game genre originate in Japan, featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual. featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual. most often using anime-style art or occasionally live-action stills. visual novel is interesting because the story is long and fun, I’m reading visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story, and I cry and laugh by the situation on the story. My friend who usual read novel also like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and easy to understand.

 Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime, and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun because of its genre easy to feel and helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an extra money by drawing in digital, I usually use this money for daily life and buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and much fun than reading novel.


23 comments:

  1. Hi Mifta, overall your outline and essay already arranged into correct structure, good job, but I suggest you to adding "paragraph 1,2 and so on" at the body part of outline

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  2. Hi,
    I think in introductory paragraph, your sentence 3 should being the thesis statement. Because there's in your essay. Overall your essay is a good. Good job!

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    1. thank you for the correction i will revised it (thumbs up)
      after i check it again, you right.

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  3. im sorry i forget the paragraph part

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  4. what a great job. the outline is already clear. maybe you should make it tidier. goodluck!

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  5. Hi Miftah... Your essay already good..👍

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  6. Hai miftah, you explain your essay very detailed, and your outline good structure. But I would like to give you suggestion, you can clarify your writing again to make it easier and clear to read like giving space for every paragraph
    good job miftah

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  7. good essay, and you explains very much

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  8. Hi Mifta! Your essay is really good. But, I think the topic sentence should be in the form of sentence, not only two words like that.

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  9. Hi Miftah. You can delivering your story well and show the structure of the essay pretty good.I got a lot of information after read your essay.
    Good job!!

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    1. Thank you very much for compliment, but i need to fix some wrong and missing part.

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    2. I think your essay and outline already clear enough. Keep up the good work!

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  10. My revised outline:

    I. Introduction
    Introductory Paragraph
    Sentence 1: Every people have their favorite to entertain their self into good mood and be able relaxed
    Sentence 2: when people in bad mood they are watching something, drawing something, reading something and other things.
    Sentence 3: what I like about anime is japan animation (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.
    Thesis Statement: my Favorite things to entertain myself and be able relaxed is watching animation japan (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.
    II. Body
    Paragraph 1: Watching Japan animation
    Topic Sentence: japan animation means all forms of animated media
    Major supporting sentence: important things used in animation characteristic technique
    Minor supporting sentence:
    - Storyboarding is a graphic organizer in the form of illustrations or images displayed in sequence for the purpose of pre-visualizing a motion picture, animation, motion graphic or interactive media sequence.
    - Voice acting is the art of performing voice-overs or providing voices to represent a character or to provide information to an audience.
    - Character design is the process of defining a game character or other character. Typically, a character's individual strengths and weaknesses are represented by a set of statistics.
    - Cel production is an important innovation to traditional animation, as it allows some parts of each frame to be repeated from frame to frame, thus saving labor.
    Conclusion sentence: These are used in making Japan animation. Usual japan animation is an adapted story from some manga, light novel, Visual Novel for example K-On!, Clannad, Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching japan animation from internet. Japan animation have age restriction based on what is the content they show, for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+ years old. I like to watching japan animation because I can relax myself and japan animation is a fun entertainment.

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    1. Paragraph 2: Reading manga
      Topic Sentence: kind of genre in manga that used in and people liked
      Major supporting sentence: People of all ages read manga by works in a broad range of genres
      Minor supporting sentence:
      - Action is kind of story utilizes suspense, the tension that is built up when the reader want to know how the conflict between the protagonist and antagonist is going to be resolved or what the solution to the puzzle of a thriller is.
      - Adventure is genre of events that happens outside the course of the protagonist's ordinary life, usually accompanied by danger, often by physical action and many kinds of things that happen in the protagonist’s story.
      - Comedy is genre always using humor to make the audience and reader laugh.
      - Detective is genre about how to find and solve the problem that happen in the story and its often to investigate a crime. Detective genre is almost same with mystery genre. For example, Detective Conan.
      - Drama is serious dramatic form that combines drama, music, and dance into a complete aesthetic performance experience. The main characters are a male and a woman role.
      - Historical is a plot story that located in the past
      - Horror is a suspense story and make the reader to feel frighten, scary, disgust, or startle.
      - Mystery is genre usually involving a mysterious death or a crime to be solved. Often with a closed circle of suspects, each suspect is usually provided with a credible motive and a reasonable opportunity for committing the crime. The central character will often be a detective who eventually solves the mystery by logical deduction from facts presented to the reader.
      - Romance is about the two people as they develop romantic love for each other and work to build a relationship.
      - Science fiction is concepts as advanced science and technology, time travel, parallel universes, fictional worlds, space exploration, and extraterrestrial life.
      - Fantasy genre often uses magic or other supernatural elements as a main plot element, theme, or setting. Magic and magical creatures are common in many of these worlds. For example, using a creature Elf, Minotaur, Orc, Goblin, lizardman, and many more in the story.
      - Sports is a genre using a sports or athletic things as main story.
      Conclusion sentence: I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. And I usually read it online and some I have bought and collect it.

      Paragraph 3: Drawing anime
      Topic Sentence: Media that used for drawing anime I know
      Major supporting sentence: Traditional style and digital style
      Minor supporting sentence:
      - Traditional style usually using a paper, canvas, and other media things that not using an electronic as a media drawing, and the tools are pencils, many kinds of drawing pencils, brush, crayon, colored chalks, and many more.
      - Digital style usually using an electronic media as a media drawing. The media are from tablet, notepad, smartphone, and pen-tablet.
      Conclusion sentence: everyone has their own style in drawing. For me I prefer to draw in traditional for sketching and digital for final drawing. drawing anime is make me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open a commission.

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    2. Paragraph4: Reading Novel
      Topic Sentence: Visual novel is an interactive game genre
      Major supporting sentence: origin, feature and style
      Minor supporting sentence:
      - Originate in Japan, featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual.
      - Featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual.
      - Most often using anime-style art or occasionally live-action stills.
      Conclusion sentence: visual novel is interesting because the story is long and fun, I’m reading visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story, and I cry and laugh by the situation on the story. My friend who usual read novel also like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and easy to understand.

      III. Concluding Paragraph
      Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime, and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun because of its genre easy to feel and helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an extra money by drawing in digital, I usually use this money for daily life and buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and much fun than reading novel.

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  11. Hi, Mifta! I like the way you explain it into an essay.It was so fun and easy to read! Your essay has a good structure and the outline is very clear. Good job! ❤

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  12. Your essay and outline was good. Good job!

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