Friday, May 17, 2019

Globalization


  Outlining an Essay

  How Has Globalization Changed Indonesia?

Topic Sentence: The effects of globalization on public transportation in Indonesia
Supporting sentence 1: The new public transportation Indonesia have.
Supporting sentence 2: The condition and reaction from Indonesia society
Supporting sentence 3: The payment method e-money or cashless.
Concluding sentence: The effects of globalization on Indonesia’s public transportation have a good effect but need time to blend in with the Indonesian people’s habits

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10 comments:

  1. HerzMay 17, 2019 at 7:16 PM

    Hi Miftah, your outline is not too general and too specific, and your supporting is already good.

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  2. YunitaMay 17, 2019 at 7:34 PM

    Hi, i think your outline essay already good because it's not too general and too specific

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  3. Wildan AuliaMay 17, 2019 at 7:58 PM

    It looks so good to read your outline, good job man!! Have a nice day

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  4. Jilan TriyanaMay 17, 2019 at 8:01 PM

    Hi, after i read your outline, i think your outline essay already good

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  5. Aulia FirdausMay 17, 2019 at 8:06 PM

    after reading your outline, topic and supporting sentence can be related. so i think its good

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  6. Gita fitriMay 17, 2019 at 8:42 PM

    I like it! Your outline makes me interested on your topic and i do hope to see more on your essay! Good job miftah

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  7. Surya Mutiara SaragihMay 18, 2019 at 1:41 AM

    Hi Miftah,
    it's a nice topic and a good outline. Good work!!!

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  8. Eemam PhoenixMay 18, 2019 at 2:59 AM

    Topic and Supporting Sentences can be related. i think it's good.

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  9. Eduardus Stevanno PMay 18, 2019 at 3:01 AM

    Its a good topic and suporting sentences. Good job miftah !!

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  10. Hibiscus505May 18, 2019 at 5:45 AM

    Hi Miftah, i found this topic useful thanks!

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