I.
Introduction
Introductory Paragraph
Sentence 1: Every people
have their favorite to entertain their self into good mood and be able relaxed
Sentence 2: when we are
in bad mood many people are watching something, drawing something, reading
something and other things.
Sentence 3: my Favorite
things to entertain myself and be able relaxed is watching animation japan
(anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual novel.
Thesis
Statement: what I like about anime is japan animation (anime), reading manga, drawing anime
character, and reading visual novel.
II.
Body
1. Topic Sentence: Japan
animation
Major supporting sentence: animation
characteristic technique
Minor supporting sentence:
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Storyboarding is a graphic organizer in
the form of illustrations or images displayed in sequence for the purpose of
pre-visualizing a motion picture, animation, motion graphic or interactive
media sequence.
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Voice acting is
the art of performing voice-overs or providing
voices to represent a character or to provide information to an audience.
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Character design is the process of defining a game character or other character.
Typically, a character's individual strengths and weaknesses are represented by
a set of statistics.
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Cel production is an important innovation
to traditional animation, as it allows some parts of each frame to be repeated
from frame to frame, thus saving labor.
Conclusion sentence: These
are used in making Japan animation. Usual japan animation is an adapted story
from some manga, light novel, Visual Novel for example K-On!, Clannad,
Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching japan animation from internet.
Japan animation have age restriction based on what is the content they show,
for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+ years old. I like to watching
japan animation because I can relax myself and japan animation is a fun
entertainment.
2. Topic Sentence:
Manga
Major
supporting sentence: People of
all ages read manga by works in a broad range of genres
Minor supporting sentence:
- Action is kind of story utilizes suspense, the tension that is
built up when the reader whishes to know how the conflict between the protagonist
and antagonist is going to be
resolved or what the solution to the puzzle of a thriller is.
- Adventure is genre
of events that happens outside the course of the protagonist's ordinary life,
usually accompanied by danger, often by physical action and many kind of things
that happen in the protagonist’s story.
- Detective is genre about how to find and solve the problem
that happen in the story and its often to investigate a crime. Detective genre is
almost same with mystery genre. For example,
Detective Conan.
- Drama is serious dramatic form that combines
drama, music, and dance into a complete aesthetic performance experience. The main
characters are a male and a woman role.
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Historical is a plot story that located in the past
- Horror is a suspense story and make the reader to feel
frighten, scary, disgust, or startle.
- Mystery is genre usually
involving a mysterious death or a crime to be solved. Often with a closed
circle of suspects, each suspect is usually provided with a credible motive and
a reasonable opportunity for committing the crime. The central character will
often be a detective who eventually solves the mystery by logical deduction
from facts presented to the reader.
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Romance is about
the two people as they develop romantic love for each other and work to build a
relationship.
- Science fiction is concepts as advanced science and
technology, time travel, parallel universes, fictional worlds, space
exploration, and extraterrestrial life.
- Fantasy genre often uses magic or other supernatural elements
as a main plot element, theme, or setting. Magic and magical creatures are common in many of these worlds. For example,
using a creature Elf, Minotaur, Orc, Goblin, lizardman, and many more in the story.
- Sports is
a genre using a sports or athletic things as main story.
Conclusion sentence: I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. And I usually
read it online and some I have bought and collect it.
3. Topic Sentence:
Drawing anime
Major supporting sentence: media
drawing
Minor supporting sentence:
- Traditional style usually using a paper, canvas,
and other media things that not using an electronic as a media drawing, and the
tools are pencils, many kinds of drawing pencils, brush, crayon, colored chalks,
and many more.
- Digital style usually using an electronic
media as a media drawing. The media are from tablet, notepad, smartphone, and pen-tablet.
Conclusion sentence: everyone
has their own style in drawing. For me I prefer to draw in traditional for sketching
and digital for final drawing. drawing anime is make
me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open
a commission.
4. Topic Sentence:
Reading Visual Novel
Major supporting sentence: Visual novel is an interactive game genre
Minor supporting sentence:
- Originate in Japan, featuring
text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by
static or sprite-based visual.
- featuring text-based story
with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or
sprite-based visual.
- most often using anime-style
art or occasionally live-action stills.
Conclusion sentence: visual novel is interesting because the story is long and fun, I’m
reading visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story, and I cry
and laugh by the situation on the story. My friend who usual read novel also
like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and
easy to understand.
III.
Concluding Paragraph
Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime,
and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I
have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation
with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun because of its genre easy to feel and
helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get
final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an
extra money by drawing in digital, I usually use this money for daily life and
buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and much fun than reading
novel.
Essay
Every people have their favorite
to entertain their self into good mood and relax. When we are in bad mood many
people are watching something, drawing something, reading something and other
things. My Favorite things to entertain myself and be able relaxed is watching
animation japan (anime), reading manga, drawing anime character, and reading visual
novel.
First is watching japan animation
(anime). well, first of all what is japan animation by the way? japan animation
means all forms of animated media. outside japan, japan animation have is own
characteristic style. Storyboarding is a
graphic organizer in the form of illustrations or images displayed in sequence
for the purpose of pre-visualizing a motion picture, animation, motion graphic
or interactive media sequence. Voice acting is
the art of performing voice-overs or providing
voices to represent a character or to provide information to an audience.
Character design is the process of defining a game character or other character.
Typically, a character's individual strengths and weaknesses are represented by
a set of statistics. Cel production is an important innovation to
traditional animation, as it allows some parts of each frame to be repeated
from frame to frame, thus saving labor. These are used in making Japan animation.
Usual japan animation is an adapted story from some manga, light novel, Visual
Novel for example K-On!, Clannad, Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching
japan animation from internet. Japan animation have age restriction based on
what is the content they show, for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+
years old. I like to watching japan animation because I can relax myself and
japan animation is a fun entertainment.
Second is reading manga, people of all ages read manga by works in a broad range of genres. From Action story utilizes suspense, the tension that is built up when the reader want to know how the conflict between the protagonist and antagonist is going to be resolved or what the solution to the puzzle of a thriller is. Adventure events that happens outside the course of the protagonist's ordinary life, usually accompanied by danger, often by physical action and many kind of things that happen in the protagonist’s story. Comedy always using humor to make the audience and reader laugh. Detective about how to find and solve the problem that happen in the story and its often to investigate a crime. Detective almost same with mystery genre. For example, Detective Conan. Drama serious dramatic form combines drama, music, and dance into a complete aesthetic performance experience. The main characters are a male and a woman role. Historical plot story that located in the past. Horror a suspense story and make the reader to feel frighten, scary, disgust, or startle. Mystery involving a mysterious death or a crime to be solved. Often with a closed circle of suspects, each suspect is usually provided with a credible motive and a reasonable opportunity for committing the crime. The central character will often be a detective who eventually solves the mystery by logical deduction from facts presented to the reader. Romance about the two people as they develop romantic love for each other and work to build a relationship. Science-fiction concepts of advanced science and technology, time travel, parallel universes, fictional worlds, space exploration, and extraterrestrial life. Fantasy uses magic or other supernatural elements as a main plot element, theme, or setting. Magic and magical creatures are common in many of these worlds. For example, using a creature Elf, Minotaur, Orc, Goblin, lizardman, and many more in the story. And lastly Sports using a sports or athletic things as main story. I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. And I usually read it online and some I have bought and collect it.
Third is Drawing anime. Drawing anime is kind of drawing that you draw is based on anime style. Drawing anime is already part of my hobby you can express your imagination and idea into a media drawing. There are two models of drawing style, traditional and Digital style. Traditional style usually using a paper, canvas, and other media things that not using an electronic as a media drawing, and the tools are pencils, many kinds of drawing pencils, brush, crayon, colored chalks, and many more. And digital style usually using an electronic media as a media drawing. The media are from tablet, notepad, smartphone, and pen-tablet. Everyone has their own style in drawing. For me I prefer to draw in traditional for sketching and digital for final drawing. drawing anime is make me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open a commission.
Last is reading visual novel. visual novel is an interactive game genre originate in Japan, featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual. featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual. most often using anime-style art or occasionally live-action stills. visual novel is interesting because the story is long and fun, I’m reading visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story, and I cry and laugh by the situation on the story. My friend who usual read novel also like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and easy to understand.
Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime, and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun because of its genre easy to feel and helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an extra money by drawing in digital, I usually use this money for daily life and buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and much fun than reading novel.
Hai miftah, your story is good. But, I think your sub topics are not related to your main topic sentence. To make it better, you can fix it hehe. Good job, boy!
ReplyDeleteThank you for the correction
DeleteThe topic are same its about japanese cartoon or anime
DeleteAnime is defined into many things
Like fanart anime (basically its a drawing ).
visual novel exist only from japan and its from galgame.
Light novel, for example light novel of sword art online. There are many volume of them. The drama story is good and its scifi story.
Manga same like comic, its also anime things for example reading sewayaki senko san.
Anime animation it's form of manga, VN,or LN (light novel) but in short version of them 😄
wow, i like many things about anime too.
ReplyDeleteyour essay is very good. but your concluison is too short.
Okay, thank you!
Deleteyour story is interesting, but your conclusion is to short
ReplyDeleteThank you i will fix to make it more longer 😃
DeleteSo interesting but i think you can make more longer the conclusion
ReplyDeleteit’s so good to read it, but it will be nicer if you directly talk about the anime. You can introduce your self, but just mentioning your name, you don’t have to introduce yourself deeper because it’s not the objective of your essay. But, overall keep up the good work, mifta!
ReplyDeletewhat a great and amazing things to do to filling mood! i also loved to watch anime before. you can describe it in detail and it is really nice. but, since we create the paragraph, not essay, it would be easy if you delete the sentence before your topic sentence to make the reader easily understand which one is the topic sentence. as you have page to describe yourself in your blog, it would be better if you do not introduce yourself too much in this post. overall, i really appreciate your work, Mifta! Goodluck!
ReplyDeletewow you really like anime. great essay but the conclusion is to short
ReplyDeleteI like your essay, and I can see how much you like about Anime, I found its quite hard to find your supporting points. It's better to you for make it more tidy so readers could easily find the supporting points, and make the introduction point and conclusion more related.
ReplyDeleteGreat things to share i also myself like to watch some anime. Maybe add more conclusion in the end
ReplyDeletegood story, but i think it's better if you focus more on anime not yourself. and you can also add more conclusions at the end. but overall it's good, good job miftah
ReplyDeleteHave a good activities. Your essay is very nice to read. But if you want more be better, i suggest you to give some topic sentences again to more support your supporting ideas. Because i not get it more in your topic senteces. And may you give 1/2 sentences conclusion in your essay in order to make the reader understanding.
ReplyDeleteGreat paragraph, but you can add more sentences in conclusions to make it clearer. Good job!
ReplyDeleteOverall good, but I suggest to rearrange the supporting sentence become more simple and clear ^^
ReplyDeleteIts a good story, but i think you can add more for the conclusion
ReplyDeleteI like anime too, especially ao haru ride. Since we are ordered to write a paragraph, it would be better if you make it simple in one line, I think it is too long to be a paragraph.
ReplyDeleteits a good story, but your conclusion is too short maybe you can add more for the conclusion
ReplyDeleteMy Revised essay:
ReplyDeleteI’m going to tell you why anime is my favorite things. What I like about anime is.
First is japan animation, japan animation means all forms of animated media. outside japan, japan animation have it's own characteristic style often characterized by colorful graphic, vibrant characters, and fantastical themes. Usual japan animation is an adapted story from some manga and light novel for example K-On!, Clannad, Idolm@ster and many more. I usually watching japan animation from internet. Japan animation have age restriction based on what is the content they show, for example gore (blood scene) it's only for 18+ years old. I like to watching japan animation because i can relaxed myself and japan animation is a fun entertainment. Second is reading manga, manga are comics or graphic novels created in Japan or by creators in the Japanese language, conforming to a style developed in Japan, and manga are typically printed in black and white, although some full-color manga exist. I like to read manga with genre comedy and drama. Well I usually read it online and I have buy and collect some manga that I like, all of them are still original haven’t translated to English or Indonesia language. Third drawing anime, drawing anime is kind of drawing that you draw is based on anime style. Drawing anime is already part of my hobby you can express your imagination and idea into a paper or other media drawing like on your smartphone using an apps for drawing. drawing anime is make me happy also its give me a profit by sell my art to others for example I open a commission. the range price for my drawing is headshot Rp 50.000, Half body Rp 75.000, full body or calf to upper Rp 150.000. For one month I can get money Rp. 100.000 to Rp. 250.000. Last is reading visual novel. visual novel is an interactive game genre, which originate in Japan, featuring text-based story with narrative style of literature and interactivity aided by static or sprite-based visual, most often using anime-style art or occasionally live-action stills. Maybe you have not seen one of this kind of anime things. I usually read visual novel anime at night because I can focus on the story and also visual novel & light novel much interesting because the story is long and fun, I usual cry when the story is so sad and laugh when the story is fun. My friend who usual read novel also like visual novel that I give to him, he told me the story is interesting and easy to understand.
Watching Japanese animation, reading manga, drawing anime, and reading visual novel is my favorite things to make me in good mood when I have bad mood, and also to fill my free-time and watching Japanese animation with friends is fun. Reading manga is fun and helpful if I watched some anime have unfinished ending so I read manga to get final ending. Drawing anime is fun and because of this my hobby I can have an extra money, I usually use this money for daily life and buy some stuff. Reading visual novel is interest and it’s much fun reading it than usual novel ever I read.
After read this may I know, do you also like to watching japanese animation, reading manga and visual novel, and drawing anime too?